(Warning: Massive spoilers for this book lie under the fold, as well as a link to a LOLPORN photo. Read on at your own peril.)
Reading Decadent deafened me.
Have you ever had that experience before? You finish reading a book and you feel just a bit numb. Your brain is ringing the way your ears do when leaving a venue with a terrible sound system, after watching a band that’s far too fond of playing very loudly and not nearly fond enough of playing with skill. I haven’t read too many novels that do that to me, so I attempted to analyze why Decadent inspired that reaction, and what I finally figured out was this:
The book was written in such a way that its ideal narrator was the Summer Blockbuster Guy.
“This summer… An innocent beauty learns the price of earning the love she thinks she wants… is finding love in a place she never expected.”
“This summer… A hardened soldier of fortune discovers that gaining the girl of his dreams… means letting go of the girl in his past.”
“This summer… A girl becomes a woman… and learns she can preserve her virginity… by having anal sex with two men.”
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So here I am, minding my own business, finishing a paper and sending it off and I decide to check out any new posts. Either I am hallucinating or that book actually exists. So I thank you , Candy, for the laughter and for saving ours lives by taking the metaphoric ass fucking of reading this book.
Hilarious review! You owe me a new keyboard, though, ‘cause mine now has coffee spewed all over it.
Now there’s a whole new avenue (heh!) to explore for guys who want to talk their girlfriends into having buttsex:
“Honey, I love you. Let me save your life!”
Also, LOLPorn!!!
Can’t. Stop. Laughing.
Oh my. Sometimes, you hear about romance novels so crappy that you have to read them, just because it’s a challenge. But this? I’m not sure even I could read this, and I’ll read damn near anything once.
One word: crap.
Her expression in the lolporn is hilarious. Hee!
It makes me wonder how in the hell they’d find out something like that. Does the dude have a Wikipedia page? If he did, I’d love to see his history/discussion pages, because god knows he’s one hot mess.
I love these reviews. So much.
I must say I’m somewhat squicked by Deke’s I-cannot-devirginise-you-so-surprise-buttsecks!, because (from the excerpt I’ve seen) he doesn’t stop to check if she’s okay with that first. (Or to add lube, either, come to think of it.) That’s not considerate or caring. Chalk a big minus mark in the hero column, imo.
omg. wow. just. wow. *blinking*
Way to, um, take one for the team, Candy. S’riously.
I’m with Danielle on this. The virgin needs lube, dude. Of course, in comparison to the rest of the review, that is fairly minor I suppose. I hope you know that I have to find and read this book. I don’t want to call you a liar, but I can’t believe this book exists until I find it for myself.
And LOLPorn just made my morning. Seriously.
Okay, now that I’m pretty sure my neighbors heard me guffawing over here…
OMG! I have to read this book and then send it to people, so they can share in the WTFery!
LOLporn FTW!!!
And about Dick—er, I mean Deke—just ‘cuz a guy can’t get wood without another guy in bed, lurves buttsecks and is terrified of the va-jay-jay doesn’t mean he’s GAY. Why the hell would you even consider teh gay? It’s totally hetero!
If ever there was a book ripe for MST3K treatment or a drinking game (take a shot every time a character starts a musing with “Damn”), this would be it.
The Loinfire Club are right on it. We’ll send you results should we not die of drink first.
OK. I think the disclaimer of, you know, THIS IS REAL PRON, should come before the actual link so retarded readers, such as myself, don’t click prematurely.
Fuck.
I’m quite sure I enjoyed reading Candy’s review much more than I’d ever enjoy reading the book…much much more.
mlg - oops! Always read everything first before taking action. Even (or especially) with LOLPorn.
Speaking of LOLPorn; that poor chick - she’s like, “Um, dude? I think you missed.”
Thank you for the witty, funny public service announcement- saving innocent romance readers from the awful.
“Was it good for me?”
How the hell can it be good for me when my sides hurt from laughing, there’s coffee sprayed on the monitor and the dog is barking hysterically ‘cause I look like I’m having fits at the keyboard?
Yes, just another typical Monday morning. With LOLPorn.
Oh how the mouse hovers over the lolporn link and oh how my finger hovers over the button.
I wanna click!
But I’m just hoping for a transfer from my job, not to get fired, so no clicky for me. :(
I loooked at the LOLPron. That’s a remarkably clean and new looking rug they are doing it on. Do you suppose this was shot in a discount store after hours?
Two erect fellas in her bed and just taking it up the butt?? That’s taking a female fantasy and turning it into .........a gay man’s fantasy? K-y jelly commercial?
You say this book isn’t written funny, I would say that NOW it is. Any of us read it, we’re gonna remember your review and yeah…you lubed it up good and its gonna slide thru funny like a….... well, you know.
I think I just fell in love with Ben a little bit. (I was already there with you, Candy).
And why isn’t there more LOLPorn? ‘Cause there should be. There really, really should be.
“everyone would agree that that having a man stick his cock up your ass qualifies as “having sex” with him.”
Well, maybe not. Remember, a former President swore that oral sex wasn’t really sex.
Next on Entertainment Tonight!
Deke Trenton is not gay he just wants another man to blame.
I can’t get over the ‘hero’s’ name Deke. Hockey fans will know that deke means to fake out another player, sneak past him and get the goal. Kinda adds a whole new level to the book for me lol.
I welcome you to cinnabar cavern
We’ve been expecting you
You bring such joy in cinnabar cavern
No matter where you stick it in know our love is true
For me, I think the best part is that he doesn’t (apparently) put on a condom for buttsecks-
Announcement to the technical virgins of the world! The ass contains many a delicate tissue; really, you need a condom as well as lube for buttsecks.
Also, threesomes with a cousin are really a little incesty. I know romance novels tend to think its vegan-kosher to have sex with in-laws and adult step-siblings, but really, that is gross and people shouldn’t do that, even years later. That is automatic book-against-the-wall behavior.
The only thing I regret about the review is not having the book in my posession so I can throw it into the wall myself.
Perhaps if you posted a video of said book flying across the room and hitting the wall I could get my vicarious thrill that way.
Dangit, I cannot click on the LOLporn, lest I get summarily axed from my job. Then again, that might not be such a bad thing…
At any rate, I just laughed myself silly, complete with wheezes and chokes. That is the saddest, SADDEST excuse for surprise buttsecks threesomes I have ever seen.
I’m going to have to seek out some Emma Holly to cleanse myself. (And THAT’s saying something…)
I’m supposed to be working, but I couldn’t resist clicking on the SB page one more time to take a second look at Candy’s review. I only had to read “Fucking her ass. Saving her life.” again to fall apart in helpless laughter.
Damn you, SBs! How am I supposed to get any work done?
I have to offer you my firstborn now. Take him. He’s yours.
*is dead from laughter*
Omg, my stomach! My lungs! I hurt! You have killed me with an od of crack!
Or, how about…
Deke Trenton - he’s not gay, he just wants to know what his cousin’s penis tastes like.
(or fantasize about it while he screws some “virgin” up teh ass, but he’s worried that doing so will kill the man he loves!)
Oh, jeebus, Candy, you almost killed me. I was laughing so hard I could barely leave a message for Jenn Echols. “Call me… when you… get this…”
I love the virgin’s response to being taking like a greek boy. “Deke?” Because I know I get timid and wide-eyed when that happens to me.
So how is it practice for the double penetration if she won’t do the double penetration? Hmmm. Mysterious.
“everyone would agree that that having a man stick his cock up your ass qualifies as “having sex” with him.”
Well, maybe not. Remember, a former President swore that oral sex wasn’t really sex.
What if it was a cigar headed up that way?
*snicker*
Do you know, over the weekend I had a conversation with 4 adults (over the age of 30 for that matter) who hadn’t heard of the cigar aspect of all that?
*Still dazed and stomach sore from all the laughing.*
I am so glad I was drinking coffee while I read that. (That life saving bit was hysterical.)
Wow. Just ... There are no words.
Candy, you deserve tons of credit. I’m sure you’ve saved many of us today.
Deke Trenton - he’s not gay, he just wants to know what his cousin’s penis tastes like.
Joanna, shut up. I can’t take any more of this. Too. Much. Laughing.
“Reading Decadent deafened me.
Have you ever had that experience before?”
Yes, with Jude the Obscure. But I don’t remember nearly so much buttsecks in Thomas Hardy. Damn him.
I’m at work, albeit in a fairly liberal environment, but I can’t wait to get home so I can see the LOLporn. Maybe I’ll have to borrow my coworker’s iPhone.
You know, there are some books I’ll purchase just to see how bad they really are. But after the Carol Lynne phenomenon (just how many of her books did those bad reviews sell, I wonder?), I’m much more careful about even inadvertently sending a message of approval via purchase. This is one of those books I won’t be buying, especially after both your review and Jane’s.
Ok, so I had to prove to myself the book really exists. I went to Amazon. The review there…and I quote, “Though she’s saved herself for Jesse, Kimber soon learns that he’s not the man adept at stoking her aching, endless need. That’s Deke, and he can’t resist when Kimber begs for more-and more.” Also, this is a sequel! And finally, four out of five stars….
Victoria -
It’s ok…just relax the muscles and move into it, which come (hur!) to think of it is probably what Deke said to his cousin once they got rid of their “virginal” beard.
I know. I am very bad for doing this to you. I am not sorry.
In all fairness to the book: there was lube (Luc had had a turn just before Deke, if I remember correctly, and I guess she was, uh, still juicy from that—ohgodnotthinkingofsantorum), and there were condoms.
Also: good point about having the warning about the explicit nature of the link BEFORE the link. I’m going to edit the review accordingly.
And in case anybody wonders about the true homogay content of this book: there’s none, at least textually. Which is part of what killllls me, because oh my God, Deke for the greater part of the book literally needs Luc there in order to get any bonin’ done, and you’d think the story could play with that, have some fun with it, but no. No. It’s because of the dead virgin. It’s always the dead virgins, man. When I start a punk band, I’m going to call it “Dead Virgins.”
The Amazon site actually has 30 odd reviews for this.
Just google the title and author and it’s amazing at what reviews you will find.
It’s a whole genre I never even knew existed. Menage a trois.
So, does oral count as part of the DP???
anything84 to submit??
(Luc had had a turn just before Deke, if I remember correctly, and I guess she was, uh, still juicy from that
Wait, wait, wait. Then why did Luc cry out in horror, “What the hell are you doing?” Did he mean, “Back off, man, that’s MY hole!”
This stuff gets published when I can’t even find an agent?
Life is Cruel.
Question:
If the heroine was a vaginal virgin (VV), can we assume that she was an anal virgin (AV) as well? And if she was an AV, Candy would you be willing to describe, briefly, the de-virgin(n)ing scene? Was it painless and orgasmic? Was there discussion about how the AV should be taken? Perhaps an argument Wherein Luc was in favor of the vaginal de-virginization and was finally convinced to go the other route by Deke’s emotional outburst of, “But man, I’m trying to save her freakin’ life!”
(I’m not at all interested in reading the book, naturally. I’d just like to hear more of Candy’s review.)
Victoria: Luc was hoping Deke would run the pussy patrol, if you know what I mean. I didn’t cover Luc’s incredibly retarded conflict and reasons for having threesomes in my review, because holy jebus it’s retarded, but here it is: he’s sterile, and he’s hoping that Deke’s super-sperm will impregnate a woman and he can have a happy threesome family 4-evah.
I honestly don’t have a problem with a stable triad (that’s kind of a contradiction in terms, because triads are notoriously unstable), either fictionally or in real life. But the fact that Luc not only lies by hiding his infertility from Deke, but that he’s actively working so that Deke’s worst nightmare comes true without ever discussing this with Deke makes him a morally repulsive douchebag, too.
And really, what’s with the lack of paternity testing? Did this book take place in an alternate reality?
Oh, God, Candy. Thank you for the explanation. Seriously, you went above and beyond the call of doody.
Now I am picturing Luc dirty-sanchezing his name above “his” hole.
Luc’s place. Viable sperm stay out!
OMG, there truly is no need to read this book. NO way could it compare to Candy’s review. I’m still laughing from it and the comments. (Because it’s either that or cry in horror!)
Candy, my 8-year-old and his friends are planning their band (when they’re 13 they’re going to be rock stars). It’s called The Flamin’ Zombies. I think the Dead Virgins would be a primo opening act for them!!!
Ye gods and little prairie dogs. This week is off to a tearing start - how can Wednesday/‘Hump Day’ possibly live up to this?
persons94 = no-no-no, way too many
Man, not only does the review make me almost laugh out loud in my cube, but the comments do too! The only thing saving my job right now is my restraint in not clickng that link…but you guys srsly make me want to work from home, just so I can see all the lolporn goodness! (badness? good badness? whutevah)
OMG, I still can’t stop laughing. And, having convinced my husband that the SBs are truly the funniest women I’ve (virtually) met, he got a good chuckle out of it too. And he didn’t even see the LOL stuff.
I agree with NHS - how does this sh*t get published when there are lots of brilliant writers getting overlooked because they’re, er,... logical?
Spam blocker: method 81, as in, “Quick, Deke, method 80 for saving a virgin’s life isn’t working. Let’s try method 81!”
Shaunee: Yes, Kimber was completely untouched—she’d barely even kissed a boy, because tall, gorgeous, slightly tomboyish girls are such turnoffs for men. Can’t think of a single dude who’d look twice at a girl who’d wear (gasp) cargo pants.
And yes, she was an anal virgin. They started off small, with a vibrator, which made her come all over the place. When actual buttfuckin’ happened, there was burning and pain, followed shortly thereafter by screaming orgasms—which, to be honest, isn’t too different from most other types of of deflowering scenes in Romancelandia.
The first actual double-penetration scene was hilarious, though—as the two cocks start registering on Kimber’s (admittedly somewhat dim) brain and she realizes what’s about to happen, Deke says something like “That’s right, kitten. Welcome to ménage. Prepare to learn the meaning of multiple orgasms.” Or words to that effect. I’ll have to look up the exact phrasing when I’m back home and have the book in front of me.
Do you guys see what I mean about the summer blockbuster guy?
“Fucking her ass. Saving her life.”
BWA! That should be the Heroes tagline for next season!
Laughing too hard to type anything else…..
Ohh, that’s hilarious! So both of them were trying to be the ass-man, due to their own various, and admittedly stoopid, hangups!!
DUDE, I’M the ass-man! My sperm don’t work!
NO! I’M the ass-man! She’s a virgin and I’ve GOT TO SAVE HER!
OMG, dueling assmen FTW!!
need46: I’m good with one, honestly…
The Romantic Times gives it 4.5 stars.
http://www.romantictimes.com/books_review.php?book=33378
I think this tells us more about the RT than about Decadent.
Spamblocker word: back51
In my next life I want to come up with a propos spamwords.
I’m crying with laughter…. seriously… that was GREAT.
Thanks for sharing the pain and glory.
I was driving home from the store when it occurred to me that this is now going to be my favorite euphemism ever in the entire history of man or beast.
“Honey, you really saved my life last night.”
“Yes. Yes, I did.”
“Seriously, you should be a lifeguard. ‘Cause that was some serious saving.”
“No doubt.”
“Man, I am so hung over.”
You can imagine the looks on my neighbors’ faces as I drove by, cackling hysterically. Thank you for making my week.
Oh, I forgot…
*cue “How to Save a Live” from the Grey’s Anatomy Soundtrack*
Victoria: you’re not the only one. My friends and I have started doing that, too.
“Man, I can’t believe how loud I was last night. I sounded like a little Asian girl who was…getting her life saved.”
“Hey, baby. Want me to save your life tonight?”
“Darling, let’s go out and SAVE LIVES.”
Oh Candy, please, please will you look up the exact phrasing and share with the class?
I almost want to read the book after this review. On a scale of 1-10, 10 being a split second of anger and frustration before your head explodes: how badly will I want to throw the book against the wall?
I, uh, liked the book. :) I’m just saying!
I liked the review better, but I *did* like the book too!
i keep trying to write something pithy here. but honestly? i have no words.
My favorite quote from an Amazon review:
My own experience with this one was to forget to eat.
Ri-i-ight. Thanks for an entertaining Monday, Candy. Can’t wait to get home to look at the porn.
ROFLMAO! Oh you Bitches! All I can hear right now is elton John singing “Someone saved my life tonight”. Do you think this is what he meant?
My word small 52 - WTF I am gonna get fired if I don’t stop laughing!
OK, this:
Deke Trenton - he’s not gay, he just wants to know what his cousin’s penis tastes like.
and this:
“That’s right, kitten. Welcome to ménage. Prepare to learn the meaning of multiple orgasms.”
caused something to break inside just now. Laughing discretely while hemorrhaging inside isn’t as easy as it sounds.
Menage a trois books are not new. They’re all the rage in the romantica epublishing world. But it’s almost exclusively Two guys and a girl (and a pizza place ... huh, why wasn’t that show porn parodied?).
Why are there so few bisexual heroines in the romance world? Because there are a lot of bi chicks out there. *sigh* I need more time to write.
ANGELINA QUOTE: All I can hear right now is elton John singing “Someone saved my life tonight”. Do you think this is what he meant? UNQUOTE
I think i broke a rib Angelina, cuz the very next thing that went thru my mind was elton john’s ” circle of life”
this may be the “thread that never ends” cuz i think there are still 4,000,001 jokes left.
Oh god, I think I pulled something laughing so hard. The book sounds like an absolute train wreck, the existence of LOLPorn is fantastic, and I think I’m going to have to go read the review again, just tomake sure I didn’t miss anything when wiping my eyes.
I think I have a horror fascination with
this book. Candy, please don’t say he really called her “kitten”?!?! And strangely, I was waiting for someone to mention some dirty sanchez (thanks Victoria) I think this is so much better than reading the book!
LOL, Victoria! I was hearing “How To Save A Life” too. Hopefully the good doctors on Grey’s don’t learn this method next season ...
And I goofed when I wrote about how I was glad I was drinking coffee - left out the n’t. I wasn’t this time… Okay. It’s pretty obvious I was still cracking up.
So I clicked on the Lolporn link…and my internet suffered an internal error. Coincidence? Or is my computer trying to tell me something?
Someone saved my life tonight, sugar bear
He almost had his cock in me, didn’t you dear…
Ok, so I had to prove to myself the book really exists. I went to Amazon. The review there…and I quote, “Though she’s saved herself for Jesse, Kimber soon learns that he’s not the man adept at stoking her aching, endless need. That’s Deke, and he can’t resist when Kimber begs for more-and more.” Also, this is a sequel! And finally, four out of five stars….
Posted by mlg on 03/17 at 08:23 AM
OMG when I first looked at this I thought the technical virgin had saved herself for Jesus!
Circle of Life.
Oh God. I may never stop laughing.
Oh, and the exact quote, with context, because the context makes it even better:
A rip, a tear. Oh, God, she knew the sound of a condom wrapper. Surely, Deke didn’t plan to…
The sinful smile on Luc’s face told her that Deke did.
“Hold still, sweetheart.” Luc gripped her hips to ensure she did.
“But Deke…He’s going to—”
“Fuck you while Luc fucks you,” Deke growled into her ear, the aroused gravel in his tone making her hot and shivery. “Welcome to ménage, kitten. Get ready to know the meaning of multiple orgasms.”
You know, all things considered, I got the quote eerily accurate, seeing as I read this book and started the review about two months ago.
As for headsploderation potential, I highly, highly recommend reading this in the company of sympathetic company. For variety, use Disney Movie Guy voice, Romantic Comedy guy voice, or Art House Tragedy guy voice just to mix things up.
And robinb: I’m glad you enjoyed the book.
“Oh how the mouse hovers over the lolporn link and oh how my finger hovers over the button.
I wanna click!”
In haiku form:
lolporn entices
finger hovers on button
i wanna click it
I just realized something else:
I will never look at Lifesavers the same way again.
ha! Thanks, Candy.
Hey, if you can’t laugh at your own appreciation for badly written, buttsecks books, then you have no sense of humor!
Besides, I can always blame 3.5 years of law school for doing this to me!
This so reminds me of something you’d find in The Pearl, which of course means if it had been written in Victorian times it would have become a bestseller over the years and mimicked by countless erotica authors.
I think I need to buy this book. I’m hovering just under the free shipping limit for chapters.ca for books I actually need ... can anyone give me a good reason why I shouldn’t? I have to see for myself ...
(girls29. heh.)
Candy, I can’t believe you reviewed this book without first reviewing the first in the series! That’s got to be bad reviewer etiquette. Somewhere.
I insist that you review the first in the series this very second. I know you’re doing the law school thing, but shit aren’t you doing that in whatever time you have leftover after catering to the needs of the Bitchery?
~“They are simply using [their policy] as a tactic to keep a small press from submitting contest entries. It also looks to me like they are trying to control the outcome of who wins by who they allow in the contest.” ~
Comes off as bollocks to me. Arrogant and whiny bollocks.
Read. The. Rules. Sister.
Eeek. So sorry. The above posted on the wrong thread.
Carry on with porn, please.
Okay, spam word is cut69. Har.
You warned me and I clicked anyway. I have no one to blame but myself. The look on her face is actually etched into my retinas.
This is the most entertainment I’ve had in days! (Candy’s review, Ben’s LOLpron and these comments, and even the excerpts themselves—but I don’t think I could handle actually reading the book.) I was holding it together until Elton John, then I lost it completely. So completely that Nora’s “Carry on” had me right back on the floor, rolling.
I love me some Smart Bitches!
First post. You’ve all had me in stitches all evening! I’m actually posting simply to share my spam word with you:
life69. heh.
OMG…my body hurts from laughing so hard today…
OMFG! Don’t you people realize I had to GO TO WORK with ‘moral turpitude’ and ‘fucking her ass, saving her life’ rolling around my head, trying not to laugh my own ass off while giving great office?
Please keep it up (heh); it’s a deadly dull job.
U.S. Writer
I am so, so happy this site exists. I haven’t laughed so hard in years. I can barely breathe!
I’m pretty sure this could be an episode of Grey’s Anatomy-
LOLporn woman? I thought that was a guy! Spamword is image63. I guess she’s got a very manly image.
OK, you all are ruining my work today. I had myself pulled together, but then Ben’s haiku and Nora’s “carry on” sent me right back over the edge.
Spam word: food46 - Fine, as long as it’s not 46 LifeSavers
Dammit, I work at an ELEMENTARY SCHOOL, I can’t click the link.
I can’t.
Oh god I can’t do it.
...
I really really want to, though.
Jesse, international rock star.
Deke, mercenary.
Luc, celebrity chef.
[LOOOOONG pause before continuing with book.]
A “back entrance” that’s a “tight passage”? Well, okay, finally something I can relate to. So I read on. (I despise our backdoor and hallway. Two people, or one person and a dog, can barely squeeze between its walls. The tendons in my neck and the muscles in my arms stand out just trying to get my damned coat on or off.)
But—OOPS—stalled again. Saving a woman’s life by fucking her in the ass? Pshaw. It’s a medical fact that some hymens do indeed extend into females’ rectums, which are, in said females, connected to their uteri and their secret suicide buttons.
Finally, out of respect for scientific accuracy, I must stop reading. Although, to the author’s credit, it is possible for the men in a two-man threesome to blame each other for the woman’s pregnancy. Why? Because certain men can sweat sperm, and the unique physiological mechanism that allows for this makes DNA testing impossible.
(That picture, by the way, was just roadkill groaty. Think I’m gonna go get that sex-change operation now.)
GREAT REVIEW, CANDY!
Wry Hag: that last bit of your comment about sweating sperm had me going “Oh my God, that’s hilarious and fucked up and she’s TOTALLY kidding…I think?” Good job.
So if Kimber (rhymes with limber) does get pregnant and kill herself—after all, according to Deke’s line of thought, isn’t that the reaction of most women to news they’re going to have a baby—would she then qualify for a Darwin award? Or would she have to get pregnant and kill Deke too?
Okay, my spam blocker is truth39, which I take to mean that I trust the SB to tell me the truth about books like this.
I was chuckling but pretty much keeping it together until:
All I can hear right now is elton John singing “Someone saved my life tonight”. Do you think this is what he meant?
That made me ROLL!
(Good thing I wasn’t at work when I read that one. On the other hand, the net nanny at work has decided that the comments section is porn. Not the site—the comments. And no, this wasn’t the comment section that set it off, believe it or not.)
friends31—a few too many to invite to the menage, obviously.
I didn’t cover Luc’s incredibly retarded conflict and reasons for having threesomes in my review, because holy jebus it’s retarded, but here it is: he’s sterile, and he’s hoping that Deke’s super-sperm will impregnate a woman and he can have a happy threesome family 4-evah.
Well, that’s actually kind of Arthurian.
If you read Marion Zimmer Bradley, that is. I don’t think it’s in Arthur, Morte d’.
Oh my god. Candy, I like LifeSavers. And now I can never eat them again. :(
Oh sweet baby jesus, I don’t know where to begin with the laughter and the comments and the lolporn. I’m supposed to be fixing my friend’s research paper!
now that i think about it, and sadly it’s taken up the better part of my day, wouldn’t this plot synopses go really well with the Sims Doin’ It Threeway Style cover from the snark post the other day? The Polyamourous Princess.
I mean, the Jesus figure totally looks like he could be a French chef, and the blond dude is totally Special Forces of the Ass (save the woman, save the world). He’s wearing the right skivvies for it.
now that i think about it, and sadly it’s taken up the better part of my day, wouldn’t this plot synopses go really well with the Sims Doin’ It Threeway Style cover from the snark post the other day? The Polyamourous Princess i think it was.
i mean, the Jesus figure totally looks like he could be a French chef, and the blond dude is totally Special Forces of the Ass (saving the world one ass fucking at a time). he’s wearing the right skivvies for it
Ow, my poor brain! Ow, my girly bits! Ow, my… you get the idea.
You have broken me.
I have to say, the phrase “Special Forces of the Ass” just made my night.
wow. hilarious.
Also, this book is hilarious. I spent all afternoon waiting to come home so I could click the LOLporn link.
Save a woman. Fuck an ass…
Y’all have corrupted me. I just googled “LOLporn” and, amazingly enough, someone else was there before you (and the innuendo continues).
Also, what is “aroused gravel” and where do I get some? Is it better than the regular gravel I have in my driveway? It sure sounds better.
I’d read recommendations for this book and it has a good Amazon rating…so I read it.
If you can get past the BS noted by Candy, you get the CS (chicken*@!).
Spoiler Alert**********
This book admits to being menage and is marketed as menage. About half way, readers watch Kimber becoming disallusioned with the Rockstar. As a reader, I’m trying to overlook the ditz factor, and Ms. Black has the manage working. She’s liking Deke, and I’m liking Luc. Then, whamo. Out of the blue, Kimber gets cold feet in the next to last chapter. Somebody gets abruptly tossed out of the mange, and the book ends with a traditional white picket fence, twosome, HEA…ack!
Never again Ms. Black.
I’ll view the LOLporn after kids are asleep.
This book must take place in the same Romancelandia Alternate Universe as Harlequin Presents. Paternity tests don’t exist there, either.
My husband made some of the most interesting facial expressions reading the excerpts from this book.
As for headsploderation potential, I highly, highly recommend reading this in the company of sympathetic company. For variety, use Disney Movie Guy voice, Romantic Comedy guy voice, or Art House Tragedy guy voice just to mix things up.
Here’s a handy-dandy reminder of what some of those guys sound like.
I’d love to set Deke up with that chick from the movie Liquid Sky. “Fucking her ass. Saving her life.” versus “I kill with my cunt!”? A match made in ... well, somewhere anyway.
As for the voiceovers, I’m imagining the Movie Phone guy: “Hello! And welcome to ménage, kitten!”
As for the voiceovers, I’m imagining the Movie Phone guy: “Hello! And welcome to ménage, kitten!”
Holy cow. This is amazing and brilliant.
Reading the book in the Krusty the Klown voice (both the jocular and regular varieties) would yield awesome results, too.
I broke down.
I just bought it.
Shit!
Nothing can save me now…oh, wait…
OMG - all of you are killing me!!! The review and the comments and the LOLPorn!!
I’ll never hear Elton John or the Movie Phone guy the same way again!
Spam word: together47—47 times? Years? Partners?
The “How to Save a Life” background music comment was the one that got me grabbing my side with teh pain.
Though I was going with the Scrubs, not Grey’s version, which means that episode’s never gonna make me cry again because I’ll be too busy picturing red lifesavers. Thanks Smart Bitches!
Oh god - now I have to know. In the HEA, is Deke cured by her magic hooha? How does he manage to function without his wingman? (Is Luc bitter by his ousting?) Or does “Kitten” remain a “virgin” forever, having her life saved over and over again?
Maybe they just have Luc on speaker phone. There and yet not there.
All the references to Elton John songs has “Can You Feel the Love Tonight?” running through my head now.
Candy,
when you quoted directly from the book for us…“she heard a rip and a tear” - I thought it was the sound of her rectum, no really - I’m not joking - I had to re-read twice to be sure it said “condom.”
I still can’t get over the LOLporn - the chick is clearly trying to give him a visual aid of which hole he’s supposed to be using. Maybe that’s why she appears so perturbed…,“it’s right there - how could you miss it?”
MamaNice, you’re not the only one who thought that. I was more than a bit horrified.
I’ve tried to come up with an adequate comment for this for two days, and I got nothin’.
Except that I think I’ll stick with fanfiction for all my menage-reading needs.
Candy,
when you quoted directly from the book for us…“she heard a rip and a tear” - I thought it was the sound of her rectum, no really - I’m not joking - I had to re-read twice to be sure it said “condom.”
I thought exactly the same thing.
And isn’t “a rip and a tear” redundant? Unless you’re Rip Torn, I suppose.
Every time I read that “Welcome to menage” I see Axel Rose screaming: “You know where you are, you in the menage baby, you gonna die”
Rebyj: I spit my morning tea on the “Circle of Life”. Crap, I think I ruined my desktop calander.
Okay, I thought we had topped out until I heard Axel Rose singing “Welcome to Menage”... and then I googled the lyrics because I couldn’t remember them all. And I got this (it’s practically perfect):
“Welcome to Menage
We got fun ‘n’ games
We got everything you want
Honey we know the names
We are the people that can find
Whatever you may need
If you got the money honey
We got your disease
In the jungle
Welcome to the jungle
Watch it bring you to your shun n,n,n,n,,n,n,,n,n,n,,n,n,,n knees, knees
I wanna watch you bleed”
I just forwarded this to my boyfriend as the perfect representation of a Smart Bitch review, and why I love y’all sooooo damn much!!!!!!
Plus, we were talking about LOLpr0n a couple days ago and this is quite appropriate.
This stuff gets published when I can’t even find an agent?
Life is Cruel.
Amen to that.
And if she was an AV, Candy would you be willing to describe, briefly, the de-virgin(n)ing scene? Was it painless and orgasmic? Was there discussion about how the AV should be taken?
Do you know what AV also stands for? In the ranching world it stands for artificial vagina.
Bwhahahahahahahahahaha
caused something to break inside just now. Laughing discretely while hemorrhaging inside isn’t as easy as it sounds.
As for the voiceovers, I’m imagining the Movie Phone guy: “Hello! And welcome to ménage, kitten!”
How I love you guys. Seriously. This is the best laugh I’ve had since I watched Death at a Funeral.
Also, what is “aroused gravel” and where do I get some? Is it better than the regular gravel I have in my driveway? It sure sounds better.
My guess is it would be like regular gravel, only harder. Maybe bigger, too.
Y’know, even though I like the idea of a Japanese Menage (2 Men, 1 Woman)... I call it a “Woman Sandwich”. (I’m not sure why it’s called a Japanese… a sex book I used to have called it that), the quotes from the book, make me squicked rather than turned on. So I’ll be giving this one a pass.
My guess is it would be like regular gravel, only harder. Maybe bigger, too.
You know, I’d been wondering about that one too.
...make me squicked rather than turned on.
All part of the fun. I have a shelf-ful of really bad novels prime crack. When my copy arrives (and after I’ve printed out and taped in the LOLPorn pic), I fully expect it to stand erect among even those hefty tomes.
I consider it a legacy to the posterior.
Uh uh,
Re AV: artificial vagina, anal virginity…could one be a euphemism for the other?
I was actually doing okay until I got here…
Save a woman. Fuck an ass…
My liver hurts.
my spamword is which54—ok not going there
LMAO! OMG! Do any of your remember a song with the lyrics, Someone saved my life tonight?
Bwhwhahahahaha.
So, I haven’t bought the book yet, but this is the fourth time I’ve read the review. Which is probably an all around better experience than reading the book, anyway.
How awesome is it that Nora Roberts (that’s actually her, right? not my mother-in-law using a nick?) commented on this thread, if only by accident? “Carry on” indeed. :)
Going with ‘saving’ lyrics - I can’t get ‘last night a DJ saved my life’ out of my head. When I switch on the radio tomorrow….
My eyes, my eyes!!!
BTW-I read the book. I did not have the..emphetic reaction that Candy did, but damn if she isn’t right about it all. If anyone wants to read it but doesn’t want to buy it, I’d be happy to send it along to you.
methods55: there are 55 ways to do teh buttsecks? wow, I had no idea.
Do any of your remember a song with the lyrics, Someone saved my life tonight?
That’s the Elton John song someone (maybe Victoria Dahl?) mentioned above.
Nora Roberts (that’s actually her, right? not my mother-in-law using a nick?)
Yep, she’s the real deal. She comes around fairly regularly, simply to serve as a shining example to the rest of us. *g*
Randi, if no one else claims it, I’ll take it. I have to admit to a burning curiousity after Candy’s review!
You can pmail me at distante at roadrunner dot com!
Thanks for the awesome read! My daughter and I couldn’t stop laughing at your review. The truly scary part is that someone wrote this—and got it published! Just an example, albeit extreme, of why I don’t read commercial romance anymore.
Ben, would it be OK if I used your fabulous graphic for an icon? It’s the funniest thing I’ve seen in a long time! Thanks so much!
LOLPorn… “Fucking her ass. Saving her life.”
Even if I could stop laughing, I’d still be speechless.
Jenyfer…yep, the magic hooha saves the day, again. I think kitten, the virgin, ends up preggers?
Jo…Lots of published authors lurk here (and comment).
I love this review. You made me laugh out loud. Thanks for the warning with three scoops of humor on top!
This whole thread, and nobody brought this up?
“Somebody Save Me” by Remy Zero, theme to Smallville, jumped straight into my head.
Somebody save me
I don’t care how you do it
Just save, save
Come on
I’ve been waiting for you
*dies*
The fact that the heroine has the same name as the keyboard-playing Hologram member from Jem and the Holograms is just sending me to all kinds of horrible mental places.
Please tell me I’m not alone.
I read this review after a friend emailed the link to me with the obligatory, ‘You have to read this!’ I’ve now printed it out and inflicted it on others. It is so delightful.
The book plot is like a psycho-sexual cage match with the hero and heroine competing for who is the biggest head case. It’s rather amazing. Of course, the one I sympathize with is the cousin who now has to find out that his second cousin is having sex with him by proxy to provide plausable deniablity. Gee cuzin, thanks. You’re a prince.
A housemate made an interesting point. The non-existance of birth-control or paternity testing, the excessive elevation of technical virginity, and the fact that everyone in three time zones know what this guy is into all sound like elements that would exist in a regency, so perhaps a tremendous amount of plot absurdity was thought out in a historical contex and then reset for contempory.
Or maybe we’re over thinking it and it’s just a mess.
Oh dear lord.
I know my friends and I are hard on ourselves about our writing but really: “Fucking her ass. Saving her life.”
I think I’m going to bookmark this review for times when my friends need a pep talk!
Yanno, the only reason to buy this book is to sit down with your bestest girlfriends, a big bowl of popcorn and MST3K it…
And prepare to hurt yourselves laughing.
Just when I though there was nothing left, my sweetie has treated me to readings of “Fucking your ass-SAVING YOUR LIFE! OOOHH YEEEAH!”
in both “The Macho Man” Randy Savage and the Kool-Aid Man voices.
Verily, I die. Thank you, Smart Bitches for making us laugh about buggery again!:)
Dear Lord. Please tell me that was just a product of an early April Fool’s shenanigan, and such book really does not exist in real life.
Jesus.
I think I’m going to go back and read some Harry Potter slash now, or something.
I bought Decadent(BIG mistake) expecting the storyteller to give me something for my money besides this feeling of having been ripped-off. Even more disheartening to me is that the author considers her customers to be fools. Fool me once. . .Shayla Black will get no more from me.
Love the review and the lolporn (more laughs than I actually derived from the book).
I read this book after this review just to make sure that it was as awful as you said. You did not lie one little bit.
Another thing that really annoyed me about the book was that Kimber is immediately this multiorgasmic blow job queen after having sex once. She must be a fucking genius (pun entirely intentional).
I didn’t cover Luc’s incredibly retarded conflict and reasons for having threesomes in my review, because holy jebus it’s retarded, but here it is: he’s sterile, and he’s hoping that Deke’s super-sperm will impregnate a woman and he can have a happy threesome family 4-evah.
...Wow, this is officially the most stupid idea ever. On everyone’s part.
Luc: I want you here so your sperm can impregnate a woman! I want BABIES! Alas, I am teh sterile.
Deke: If I devirginize a woman, she’ll get pregnant and die! So I want you there to give me plausible deniability.
Kimber: Well, I guess that is nice of you to make sure all my needs are- wait, plausible deniability?! What about the whole KILLING ME thing!?
Deke: What? You thought I wanted him there so I’d have both ends covered (ha ha) for your sake? Hell no! Covering my own (COUGH) ass.
Luc: ...Dude. STER. ILE. If she gets pregnant, it’s you. I NO CAN HAZ SPERM.
Okay, I admit it, I actually was laughing so hard I started crying while reading this—- and though I am usually a very jovial person, I am rarely reduced to actual tears rolling down my face. I can’t even read the comments yet because it’s all I can do just to type.
Now I’m humming “I need a hero” from Bonnie Tyler.
I turn 21 in a month, and I’m going to Vegas with a few of my cousins, my aunt, and my mom.
This book is coming with us, because I am already planning a drinking game for it.
(...I actually bought the book- used and dirt cheap, natch, because there’s free bad porn all over the net, and I refuse to pay fifteen bucks for it- of Amazon after reading this review, because there are only so many times you can do the LKH ‘Take a shot every single time a sex act/organ is referred to by some odd euphemism that is just funny and not OMG HAWT AND SO ARTISTIC like the author assumes’ drinking game before you die of liver poisoning or it stops being fun. Whichever comes first.)
Also? I read the ‘in ur ass, savin ur life’ scene to my best friend, and I can safely say this book brings pervs with weird senses of humor closer together.
So: awesome review, and thank you for introducing me to something that will only get funnier as I get drunker.
...Also? The thing that made me laugh the hardest: Deke screws Kimber (WTF is with that name, by the way? I live in goddamn California, have my entire life, and even I have NEVER met a chick named ‘Kimber’.) up the ass with, like, no lube, but when they go at it vaginally, he uses, like, three gallons of lube.
One would think more lube would be appreciated on a passage that is NOT self-lubricating, but clearly life-saving anal sex is magic beyond its life-saving capabilities, so what do I know?
“Fucking her ass. Saving her life.”
Now see, I’ve run across these boink-to-save-the-Galaxy (planet, kingdom, whatever) plots in SF/F/Paranormal romance, and they can be pretty hilarious under those circumstances. But this degree of specificity (has to be anal, other dude must be there, etc.) plus the contemporary setting freakin’ blows my mind.
Spam word: service51
Oh, noes! Two is plenty!
Hilarious.
And I’m mostly commenting to post my spamword, and I promise you I’m not making this up:
filled25
A friend gave me this link a long time ago and now she gave it to me again and I can’t stop laughing! I wish I could wright stuff like that and I’m not talking about the book I’m talking about the review! Hi-freaking-laurious.
So if I take it up teh ass I’m saving my own life or maybe I’m saving someone elses life to? Because if I take it up teh ass someone else don’t have to suffer the horrible deed of being deflowered by that person right? So girls, I think we must take one for the team here, if we all do it we could save the whole world and everyone will live in peace and harmony forever… wait didn’t the hippies already invent that? Alas…damn hippies.
And I think we all should have some more LOLporn in our lives.
spam word: hold62… hold on a second…?
I really want to know… if it’s double penetration, and they’re both ass men, were they both doing her up the ass at the same time? Talk about needing lube…
omg…i have not laughed this much in…i think ever. i will never ever look at the lion king in the same light again…just so glad that neither of those songs were playing on my Ipod as I read this.
No wonder lifesavers have a whole in them, that’s where the dick goes!
LOLPorn—I fucking love it.
I got the link to this from something with reviews of really bad books and the comments/review are literally making me laugh until I cry. This is one piece of trash I will never buy.
My spam word is involved75.
My ass hurts in sympathy from all that buttsecks, and my sides hurt from your review and all of the comments.
Ok, I cannot believe I missed this entire post - truly mind-boggling (not to mention all the buttsecks! lol)
I started this at work, came home to finish and was totally delirious by the time I got to the LOLporn.
I’ve spent the last 10 mins reading this to my husband - he’s a fireman and rescue will never be the same! lol
Spamword: fire45 lol
I just recently discovered your site…I’ve been missing out. That review is funnnnnnny. I read it because, I too, read this book. I just wish I was half as clever so I could critique it as you did. Instead, I just kept shaking my head wondering how so many people in one hole err, I mean house, could be so freakin’ stoopid.
The worst part about this is I also read the previous book and thought it was stoopid too. Man, I think I need an intervention. Is tacky to plan and throw your own? What would Kimber do?
It’s a good thing the sexxing is hawt.
Oh, my! My dear friend forwards these entries to me and I must say, you have a gift. I don’t normally read trash novels, but I am tempted to start…just to see if I can find hilarity.
I just wanted to share:
my friend got the new Kindle (v2), and Decadent is Kindle-ized, so we downloaded the sample and made the Kindle read it out loud with the new text-to-speech feature. That vaguely female, robotic voice reading that book was as epic as I imagined it could be.
There was something missing from the LOLPorn, but I fixed that for you:
And if that link doesn’t work, look at the first pic here:
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We both know that people love to read books especially all about love and real stories, because they can relate their experiences base on the story of what you have written in the book. We would like extend our deep…
I’m so glad I’m not the only one who immediately thought Stephanie Meyer when I saw these two things….
And since y’all have sniped all of the titles I could come up with, here’s the first line of our…
Bought the last two books you recommeded—“Naked Edge” and “Something About You”. Loved both of them and also noticed—discussing future thesis—thesi—theseses—ahem—is that the men in both of these books had very well developed and a tad more “realistic” characters than…
another vote for the first one. The second one is awful.
Eee, these are too much fun! Here’s some of mine (and a couple of friends chipped in after I mentioned this on a forum
<3)
Backpacking Through Crystal Valley
Twinkle Lips and Don Mon Bedonkidick
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