TheDemon’sDaughterbyEmmaHolly

by SB Sarah Thursday, July 14, 2005 at 09:26 AM
Our Grade:
F
Title: The Demon's Daughter
Author: Emma Holly
Publication Info: Berkley Publishing Group 2004, ISBN: 0425199185
Genre: Historical: Other

I have to give this book an F because I am so damn bored by it I don’t even want to finish it. I’m on page 135 out of 311 and I couldn’t give less of a shit about these characters. So this will have to be a half-finished review because I can’t be bothered to give a damn.

I think it speaks volumes that I am in my 2nd trimester and flush with hormones that should have responded merrily to this book, but instead were left with a feeling of, “Who in the what now?” Even my hormones were confused.

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Picture of emdee said on...
07.14.05 at 10:05 AM |

This was the first Emma Holly book I read.  I managed to get through the whole thing but I still didn’t understand what was going on most of the time.  It’s a pretty good indicator that something is wrong when I begin skimming a book instead of reading it. This book is a muddled mess and almost put me off reading any more Holly.  But reading this site and others convinced me to give her a second chance and I bought Menage.  And I wasn’t sorry about that.  Read every word too, some more than once…

Picture of June said on...
07.14.05 at 10:18 AM |

Totally agree with everything you said, Sarah.  I did manage to finish the book, but it was really tough going.  The world she was trying to set up seemed interesting in theory, but never really gelled.  I can see the premise working as a straight-up sci fi/fantasy book without the romantic element. 

That said, I’ve read other books where the plot didn’t really work but the chemistry of the couple pulled me through anyway.  No chemistry here, and I just basically never liked Adrian.

Picture of Sarah said on...
07.14.05 at 10:21 AM |

Emdee, it is so funny you should say that, because I started Menage right before I decided I couldn’t deal with the plot of The Demon’s Daughter. And Menage is much better.

And June, I hear you - I didn’t like Adrian either, and couldn’t be bothered to care about him. But the way he treated Roxanne, who I did like? Oh, not cool, dude. Take your implants somewhere else.

Picture of HelenKay HelenKay said on...
07.14.05 at 10:29 AM |

Yowza.  That sounds terrible.  I’ll stick with her contemporary stuff, which I don’t always love but at least I understand.

Picture of AngieW AngieW said on...
07.14.05 at 12:25 PM |

Sarah, as further proof that you and I have similar reading tastes, I didn’t finish this one either. Hated it, hated it, hated it. And I don’t say that very often. It was the first book by Emma Holly I’d ever read. Or not read as the case happens to be!

Picture of Danielle Danielle said on...
07.14.05 at 12:32 PM |

So, to recap: “He’s a demon-altered super cop who is shunned by most human society. She’s a half-demon erotic painter who knows the perfect manner for giving a hand job. Together they fight crime boink like bunnies!”

That about cover it?

Picture of Meljean Meljean said on...
07.14.05 at 12:34 PM |

This was one of my favorite paranormal romances last year :D

I loved the world-building—it did take me a while to understand what was going on, but I’m never sure if that is me or just the way in which it is presented. And I can see where some of the elements you mention here might not work for a lot of people, but somehow they just clicked with me. I absolutely loved Adrian’s character, and thought his class dilemma and the demon/human castes fascinating.

The ending did confuse me on the first reading—I wasn’t absolutely certain how the heroine defeated the baddie at the end, but I think I finally got it on the reread. So it wasn’t a perfect book for me, but I really, really loved it in a lot of different ways.

Picture of Sarah said on...
07.14.05 at 12:54 PM |

I think this book might be a coriander of romance. Some people love them some coriander. Some people think it tastes like soap and is the nastiest thing ever.

Picture of Candy said on...
07.14.05 at 01:27 PM |

OK, now I’m really fascinated.

Meljean and I tend to have similar tastes, and Sarah and I agree about the awesomeness of books only half the time.

I’ll have to check this book out. When, I have no idea. But I’ll definitely have to give it a shot.

Picture of Maili Maili said on...
07.14.05 at 02:31 PM |

It did take me a couple of tries, but the story finally sucked me in and kept me reading to the end.  It’s flawed and it does drag at times, but for its type, it’s bloody good.

Romance-wise, it’s a bit patchy, but overall, I enjoyed TDD - certainly a lot more than CATCHING MIDNIGHT and BEYOND INNOCENCE [which pissed me off, and still does]. I found Emma Holly’s imagination and world-building intriguing and quite exciting. How often do we have something like this in historical romance?

Although it didn’t give me the emotional satisfaction, I do consider it a keeper. So it’s filed under “Flawed But Original Historical Romances”. I think it’ll have a small cult following in a decade’s time. You’ll see. :D

Picture of Jorie Jorie said on...
07.14.05 at 02:50 PM |

Well, I’m still on page 76 and I suspect always will be.  Just kinda got bored and was not impressed with the confused world.  Or Adrian who didn’t make sense to me.  But, I know others enjoyed TDD despite the worldbuilding problems.

Picture of Dawn B. said on...
07.14.05 at 03:03 PM |

Hrmm.. I really liked Catching Midnight and was consdering The Demon’s Daughter.

I loved Menage, and finding out that Holly also wrote paranormal/fantasy (I’m a SF/F person with a recently discovered romance interest) just made my day.  Catching Midnight was okay, not as much world building as I liked, but (for me) made up in the Romance area by not having a sexually pure heroine.

Picture of Alyssa Alyssa said on...
07.14.05 at 09:11 PM |

I haven’t read this book, though I do have one of Holly’s books in my TBR pile. Maybe it’s Catching Midnight? I’m not sure. I found a like-new copy at a UBS and figured I’d give it a try.

I’m just impressed at how long a review you wrote for a book you didn’t finish.

Picture of CindyS said on...
07.15.05 at 12:43 AM |

I was thinking along the same lines as Alyssa.  Not only that, but you are able to filter down her world-building so that I understand it.  I have this in the TBR pile along with many of her other books (can’t remember the titles) so if I ever pick it up, I’ll have a running knowledge of what may be about to take place.  Although, the whole ‘don’t want to be seen with ya’ thing shoulda been done different.  Hey, if she gets him all hot and bothered and then gets up and leaves, I’m in.  Other than that, not too impressed.  Who wants to be with someone who doesn’t want to be seen with you.

CindyS

Picture of June said on...
07.15.05 at 05:13 AM |

Candy, you’re welcome to my copy if I still have it!

Picture of Aoife said on...
07.15.05 at 05:24 AM |

This was the first and only Holly I ever (partially) read, and it put me off her in a big way because all the other reviews I read thought it was wonderful, and I just...didn’t...GET IT.  Not only did I think Adrian was an ass, but the world-building was so muddled that I got the impression that Holly hadn’t really bothered to think things out.  If some of her other books are good, I’d be interested in giving her another try, but TDD was a big snooze.

Picture of Sarah said on...
07.15.05 at 05:56 AM |

You know I thought to myself as I was reading this book, “How am I going to make a review out of ‘She’s neat, he’s a boor, and I don’t care to finish this book?’” I suppose I had more to say than I thought I did - especially to justify the low grade.

I think I do the same for high grades - Oh! This book made me squee and cry and weep with joy! And I better come up with some conclusive reasons for this before I lose all credibility!

I also love how Candy and I agree on some things and are polar opposites in taste in other departments. Makes for good reviews and larger reading lists - and I will bet $5 that she reads this book and posts a review along the lines of “Sarah is nuts and this book Rawwwks!” Heh.

Picture of charlotte charlotte said on...
07.15.05 at 09:20 AM |

I was depressed when I first saw the book. Because Holly beat me at it. It was a matter of time I guess.

Some 15 years ago, I created a world a bit similar to that.  I even finished writing the first book of the series. To try to publish it now, would make me look like a copy-cat.

But the more I read, I knew I could do it better than that. Now I just have to get off my creative butt, dusty up the ol manuscript and prove it… ;)

Picture of fiveandfour fiveandfour said on...
07.15.05 at 09:22 AM |

Sarah - I completely agree with your assessment of this book.  I still don’t know how it was that I was able to finish it.  I must have been excessively bored or particuarly brain dead, or maybe just hoping it would redeem itself.  But it never did.  Aaargh, how I hate that. 

I think if this were the first Emma Holly book I’d ever read there would be no praise in the world strong enough for all of her other works to induce me to try her again. 

It’s scary, when you think on it, how easily a normally good author can completely lose out on a potentially loyal fan: all it takes is one bad book and a bit of bad timing.

Anyway, I’m now eager to hear Candy’s opinion.  My money is on her disliking it.  Shall we take bets on how many pages she can read before throwing in the towel?  Any actuaries out there who can set up a betting table for the group?

Picture of Maili Maili said on...
07.15.05 at 10:26 AM |

Since you suggested the idea, you get to set it up. :D

I’m willing to bet a fiver that Candy won’t like it.

Picture of fiveandfour fiveandfour said on...
07.15.05 at 10:36 AM |

Hoo boy, I’ve done it now, haven’t I?  OK, I’ll get some advice and go for it.

In other news, the cute sandals I bought the other day that were sooooo comfortable when I tried them out in the store are bugging the crap out me me today.  Now I’m caught between vanity (they look so good, I just need to suck it up and develop a tolerance to the irritation) and acting with common sense (if they’re that bad, take the damn things off).  No point to all this except I felt it just HAD to be said :).

Picture of Candy said on...
07.15.05 at 10:38 AM |

All right, motherfuckers! The heat is on! I’ll drop by Borders on the way home today and pick up a copy of The Demon’s Daughter. We’ll see if this will break my month-long “completely unable to finish any book I pick up” streak.

Go ahead and place the bets.

Picture of white raven said on...
07.15.05 at 03:38 PM |

Based on some of Sarah’s points in her review, and Candy’s comments about her personal dislikes in other book reviews, I’m betting she’ll hate it.  Next?

Picture of Candy said on...
07.15.05 at 04:36 PM |

I’m headed to Borders in minutes. According to their on-line inventory, they have it in stock.

This doesn’t necessarily MEAN anything, which I learned the hard way. But I’ll be heading over there and hopefully starting on the book this weekend.

Picture of CindyS said on...
07.15.05 at 07:40 PM |

Just to be contrary I say Candy’s gonna love it.  She won’t think it’s the best of Holly but, she’ll admit she would read Holly’s grocery list because she is such a slut for all things written by Holly.  Yep.

CindyS (aka Anne Stuart slutsky)

Picture of Joyce Ellen Armond Joyce Ellen Armond said on...
07.16.05 at 03:30 AM |

I must break with the pack and say I liked it. Steampunk is one of my favorite sci-fi subgenres, so I was already jumping in with both feet.

I had no trouble with understanding the world-building. In fact, I remember being disappointed that I didn’t get to learn more about the demon’s society.

The one thing that bothered me about the book, and about so many other books in this genre, is that the heroine was a virgin. Gak! Who needs em? I am not the founder of the Deflower the Virgins Literary Action Committee for nothing.

Picture of Robin Robin said on...
07.16.05 at 06:42 PM |

“I must break with the pack and say I liked it. Steampunk is one of my favorite sci-fi subgenres, so I was already jumping in with both feet.

I had no trouble with understanding the world-building. In fact, I remember being disappointed that I didn’t get to learn more about the demon’s society.”

Any more recommendations for Steampunk?  I didn’t realize that’s what this book was until Maili described the sub-g on AAR.  I also really liked this one, and felt the same way you did about wanting more detail on the demon culture.  In fact, I would have liked it if Holly did a more thorough job in linking all the “fragments” at the beginning of each chapter to the textual details because that’s where I felt the disconnect most strongly between the eroticism of the story and the world-building.

The first time I read the book I thought it felt rushed and over-sexualized relative to the sci-fi aspects, which I wanted developed in more detail.  I also wanted that emotional intimacy Holly delivers so well in some of her other books.  But I felt both leads were likeable, and I enjoyed the way she used Max and Charles and the whole surrogate family aspect of the story.  I understood Adrian’s ambivalence toward a relationship with Roxy and actually felt he sorted it out with less angst and cruelty to her than many Romance authors seem to heap on their characters as a way to build tension.  And no matter what, Holly seems to have a real affection for her characters that comes out in her writing, IMO.  The one thing that always strikes me about the way she writes her Romantic leads is the tenderness they seem to share, especially sexually, which I’ve actually found to be surprisingly un-ubiquitous in erotic Romance.

I didn’t like DD as much as Catching Midnight or Beyond Seduction, but I did like it more than Hunting Midnight and Beyond Innocence.  I have, though, felt her last few books and short stories seem to have a rushed quality to them, and I hope that doesn’t continue.  I’d really like to see Charles and Beth’s story next.

Picture of Cece Cece said on...
07.17.05 at 07:20 AM |

I admire anyone that can worldbuild!  I’m too lazy LOL but I haven’t read it and I haven’t even bought it.  though i will admit I did love her erotic regencies!

Picture of Joyce Ellen Armond Joyce Ellen Armond said on...
07.18.05 at 03:44 AM |

Robin said: Any more recommendations for Steampunk?

No, which makes me sad. Steampunk works in the movies, a la the one with all the Victorian weird heros who become a group to fight Q. Amanda Quick kind of did it in The Paid Companion. But alas, nothing else. :(

Picture of JC JC said on...
10.28.07 at 08:06 AM |

I have to echo that I didn’t really get into this book- I actually started reading it in the library, got to page 30 and put it down.  I’ve read others of Emma Holly’s and I’ve enjoyed them, and some I haven’t enjoyed.  But this isn’t one of her better ones.

Picture of peggy said on...
01.10.08 at 12:10 PM |

yeah, this book made me tired. but I was stubborn and finished it.

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